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Gitanjali Ramamurthy's avatar

Loved it where you say Pitamah to intervene. It would have changed the course of the story. Great tribute, to Nakul. Felt a feather cross my face reading about Bhim’s gentleness. Also, Arjuna detesting war after the Matsya episode. Great writing!!

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Bharathi V- MyMBJourney's avatar

Thank you

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Tathagat's avatar

It filled my eyes with tear for Nakula saying about brother bhim's protective nature.Eldest was more mature like a god it's only brother bhim with whom Nakul mixed Arjuna,sahadeva both hide their emotions and say when needed.Nicely narrated 🙏 Sahadeva hope all scattered knowing the future that's why he is more mature though youngest.(Nakula)

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Tathagat's avatar

Very nice to see a message for Nakula that hero who was brave,who always carried like a hawk to destroy enemy.perseverance,bravery, beauty of person, humility are all present in Nakula.In anusasana parva he asked about swords origin to Bhisma,that said no one among that era was as accomplished swordsman as nakula.Truely we want more on Nakula,sahadeva.

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Bharathi V- MyMBJourney's avatar

Thank you so much for your appreciation and feedback.

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Shruti's avatar

Beautiful! Especially the ending para of wanting Pitamah to intervene, knowing he wont and how the youngest was the least naive among them!! So little has been written about the twins so its always nice to read something about them

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Bharathi V- MyMBJourney's avatar

Thank you :)

Yes, the twins are usually not in the spotlight

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Bharathi V- MyMBJourney's avatar

Thank you. Yes, unfortunately the personalities of the Pandavas are very little explored and that too, the twins are really not often seen with any depth at all.

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Deepak M R's avatar

Nice POV experiment, helps to bring out Nakula's personality

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Bharathi V- MyMBJourney's avatar

Thanks, it actually helps flesh out the character and then it makes it easier to incorporate the character into a larger series or a full story. Otherwise, I can't 'see' Nakula/ Sahadeva when I'm writing them :(

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